Thursday, 7 July 2011

Us, Unvorsum

Thursday 7th July 2011, A. Palmer



Clouds rolled in your eyes-
white over blue like two
small planets in your sockets.

I was an astronaut, finally,
floating freely and seeing
double in your face’s rotation.

You had your hands in pockets,
mine, not yours, to draw
me closer to your sighs

and the safety of the station;
cables in arms, pressed palms,
pulling this spaceman home, finally.



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  1. oh arron this is just beautiful...i'm floating in space alone by reading this...smiles

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  2. Clean, beautiful-- I love the ease of this poem. xxxj

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  3. Well crafted poem! Great job.

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  4. awww how sweet and what a beautiful moment captured in your words ...thank you

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  5. This is just delicious. Makes me a little homesick...Hey, thanks for stopping by my place and for your kind words about my poem. It's been an emotional week. Happy feels good.

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  6. 'seeing double'... yes, and exactly how this made me see the world. Clean, touching write.. I'll be bacK.. :)

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